Goodbye ManaWorld Page 8

This was a really nice. excellently-done piece! You put a lot in the story with things both implicit and explicit, and I really like how you did the overall images to mimic those you'd see on a screen (aka, the digital blips, the wavy lines, and so on and so forth). You always have a definite style all of your own and you proved that you have a keen attention to detail here, as well. Again, very well done!